Improvement needed:

From the moment i decided that i was going to read a book a week and review it, i have been learning and improving my writing skills. I feel i did get some things right and do need to improve:

• My focus line i felt improved and was quite good by the end of it: Summing up my feelings and the book in one or two lines. "From start to finish I couldn’t put it down, it was scandalous, sexy and sad. The untold story of Mary Boleyn and the Boleyn family who will stop at nothing to get what they want." (Ending line from The other Boleyn Girl review) and " It was a novel oozing in smells and description" (From my Perfume review) and "To Kill a Mockingbird has life to it, it has a heart that is filled with so much emotion. This is a must read, and the moment you finish, reading it again is a definite." (From my To Kill a Mockingbird review)

• My negative feelings need to improve, although thankfully I only disliked one book i read (Catcher in the Rye) I still wrote a pretty bad review. I hope next time I read a book that lets me down I can say it was bad without stating that outright.

• I always knew what was good and what was bad about my reviews and could compare them to the professional ones. Every week I said, I need to improve this. I think I did improve too, my the end of the 5 weeks of book reading I could say I improved and learnt alot about critically reviewing novels, adn even what makes a good book to me.

• I enjoyed myself!!!! I love reading and it was a really great and fun time doign so. I wanted to come to Uni on a friday so i could write my review and feelings towards my books.
• I kept up with my work, so much with Uni, I can get behind, this one has been perfect.
• I need to write more, sometime i had so much to say but kept my reviews shorter, and then comparing my review to the professional review was harder because i had barely wrote much compared to the professional one.